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Now I am experimenting with the Choka form.  My understanding

of its structure is 5,7 X 4, then 7, followed by an envoi 5,7,5,7,7.

Maybe I should have reserved it for a more public theme, rather than

a private one?  You tell me!

 

Holy Cow!

 

 

I opened the gate

and noted you cows had gone.

I have Right of Way.

You were on the bank

opposite to me.

But I still felt quite anxious.

Your calves now bigger,

you seemed absorbed in grazing.

Cows can’t cross a stile.

A man with a dog,

confidently strode past me.

Cows, please don’t see them!

Last time you crossed the bridge and

I turned and fled for my life.