acronym, arrythmia, Bourbon biscuit, correcting fluid, Daily Mail, faggots, gender fluid, Hippocratic oath, Jammie Dodger, Jeremy Paxman, libido, testosterone, University Challenge
Augustus Snodbury, Acting Head of St Birinus Middle School, looked out
on his assembled staff. It was the first meeting of 2014 and he felt
uncomfortable in The Headmaster’s chair, amid so many grumpy men.
He nodded curtly to Geoffrey Poskett, relaying an unspoken message
which underlined the transmission that their coincidental holiday
encounter was, in no way, to imply any kind of partiality or informality
now that they were back in their normal routine.
Yawn! Yawn! There were the usual parental missives, if not missiles,
informing staff of snowboarding fractures. Then there were Boys To Be
Discussed. This provoked an excited background hum and Snod had to
lay down the law firmly: One of you may buzz, I mean, speak.
The School Calendar had been printed at the end of the previous term,
but was now distributed. Usually each fixture had to be gone over in fine
tooth detail, but Snod pronounced: Well, you can all read, I suppose, so, in
the manner of Jeremy Paxman at the start of University Challenge, I will just
invite you all to crack on.
He eyed young Milford-Haven who was about to snaffle his own favourite
Bourbon biscuit from the trolley. However, when the young puppy felt the
elder educator’s gimlet gaze bore into him, he eschewed his first choice
and opted for a Jammie Dodger instead. Very wise as a future career
No conferring! Snod emphasised.
He glanced at dates for the end of term and mused: Oh, why does Easter
have to be so late this year? If it is a moveable feast, then why can’t it
be shunted closer to release us all from scholastic torment?
Nigel Milford-Haven put up his hand. As John Boothroyd-Smythe’s form
teacher, he felt compelled to put one and all in the picture re/ behavioural
issues and their mitigating causes. One of these was that B-S’s sister had
apparently ‘come out‘ recently as being gender fluid.
I’ve heard of correcting fluid, remarked ‘old school’ Snodbury, but never the
sexual variety. Pray, clarify.
Several know-it-alls who had been paying attention at the previous in-
house training on Psychosexual Proclivities and the Learning Process came
to attention and tried to contribute to the allegedly open forum.
One of you may answer! boomed Gus. Well, fascinating though the subject
promises to be,..His olfactory sense had just radared that the first sitting
of lunch was a possibility.
Who is on Lunch Duty today? he asked.
Poskett, always poised for a hasty getaway, was crouching near the door.
I am, sir! He bowed his head and fled. He had known that they would
never get round to the pressing matter on his agenda. Maybe next week!
A final notice, Snod declared. The smell of faggots was making him lose
concentration. You may be wondering how The Headmaster is. The good
news is that he has not suffered a stroke. Not even a TIA, to use a medical
acronym. His wife assures us that he has only been experiencing mild
arrythmia, brought on by an arduous Autumn term, combined with an
overindulgent celebration on Christmas Eve. And, if you have been reading
The Daily Mail lately, which, God Forbid any member of this illustrious
academic establishment would..
Here the aroma of hot beef olives, to use a more polite culinary term, was
…Where was I? Oh, yes, apparently the acme of journalistic achievement
has suggested that some men d’un certain age develop irrational anxieties,
heart palpitations and alter their personality through low levels of
testosterone. (He stroked his new leather jacket in a spontaneous gesture
of subliminal self-awareness.) They can even lose their..
Libido, supplied an earnest Milford-Haven, who was probably the only one
in the staffroom attempting to follow his drift.
Suddenly thirty two pairs of eyes widened and their owners ceased to
dwell on stuffing and onion gravy.
Snod coughed. Aaagh, whatever! he agreed. Anyway, to cut a long story
short, his wife has persuaded him to combat excessive grumpiness by a
course of hormone injections, which should render him more..
Subservient! Milford-Haven nodded.
Compliant! re-stated Mr Snodbury, glaring at the exhibition of impatience
shown by the Junior Master. He recognised a desire to conclude proceedings
in the worthy cause of nutrition. But the boy should know his place. He had
to restrain himself from awarding the member of staff an order mark and
So, not a word of this confidential information is to pass beyond these walls,
stressed The Acting Head. He then had to watch everyone else exiting the
room before himself, which probably meant that he would have to go to the
second sitting in the dining room and there would be no faggots left.
Meanwhile, in a mockery of the Hippocratic oath, The Headmaster’s wife was
discussing her husband’s alarming symptoms in Costamuchamoulah must-
seen cafe, over two lattes, with the GP’s spouse, who was going to relay
the absorbing details to multiple caffeine addicts in the weeks to come.
Dalo 2013 said:
The dialogue in your writing is great, not just with them speaking to each other, but the thought process (e.g., “was about to snaffle his own favourite Bourbon biscuit from the trolley. However, when the young puppy felt the elder educator’s gimlet gaze bore into him, he eschewed his first choice and opted for a Jammie Dodger instead”
This is what draws me the reader into your stories.
May you continue to be so drawn!
Thank you again for the positive feedback. I shall try to persevere and earn your further approval.